Prácticas de redacción 2014/2015

domingo, 11 de enero de 2015

New education system in Spain-opinion essay. Práctica evaluable.

Nowadays, in Spain every political party wants to make a new education system. However, it is a big mistake because we have to change our study habits frequently, and it will drive us crazy. Along my life, I have known two models of education, I disagree with both of them.
First at all, I desire to communicate that the worst decision of the government is the change of subjects. Politicians prefer students to learn more Maths and languages and less Art and Philosophy. From my point of view, it is because they want to control our mind; creativity and knowledge give people freedom.
The next point is that people who work for the government have a lot of money; however, they steal us much more money because " every citizen has to collaborate to increase the economy of our country". Students lose materials, we have less money to buy our books, we can't travel to other countries to learn different languages, while they are wasting their money in a new house, phones and more expensive things.
To conclude, politicians mustn't be selfish, they have to respect us and think solutions to finish with the poverty in Spain. Therefore they should make our studies easier because young people are the future. Furthermore we deserve to be free, we should study whatever we want and increase our creativity.

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